I am so concern about the standard of writing for so many reasons in particular Hi Fi is a very professional product. In certain kinds of Hi Fi magazine writing, particularly in product criticism, it is normal to come across long passages which are almost completely lacking in meaning.
A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus: 1. What am I trying to say? 2. What words will express it? 3. What image or idiom will make it clearer? 4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?